Monday, January 18, 2010

Just when you….

Just when you start thinking your life is good.. it decides to take a harsh turn..

Just when you think everything has fallen into place… you realize everything is starting to fall apart..

Just when you think everything’s gonna be all right.. you realize you thought too quickly.

Just when you think you’ve finally found friends among strangers, one of them turns their back on you

Just when you think you can start trusting people again, someone betrays you

Just when you think you’ve had enough.. you are pushed a little more towards the edge

Just when you think you can’t get hurt any more.. someone hurts you deeply and badly..

Just when you think you have had enough bad experiences to make an incorrect choice again, you realize you are again walking on the wrong path..

 

But just when you think you should give up.. just when you think it’s not worth all that pain.. you realize you are wrong.. you realize that it’s just another challenge you’ll have to face, just another fall you should get up from.. just another reason for you to be happy, just another opportunity for you to prove yourself to the world… :)

6 comments:

Saeed Shiekh said...

very good poem. keep up the good work.

Intricate said...

@Saeed Shiekh
Welcome to Intricate Zone :)
Didn't intend it to be a poem.. but thanks a lot :) :D

The Writer said...

Why do we emphasize on the dark aspects of life and things as they are? Why do we think that only bad can come out of something?

Something good always comes from whatever happens.. my belief. If we focus on the good and ignore the rest can't we be a little less miserable?

Can't we enjoy the things as they are? Can't we just ignore that may cause something bad from happening? But do we stop to think that much?

We would be perfect wouldn't we if we could do that?

Just some thoughts :)

Anonymous said...

Am speechless!

But sometimes you get 'tired' of thinking positions and 'hoping' always. All you want is just a RAY of light in darkness. And you begin to even start 'doubting' your 'faith'. You get scared to even have faith, keeping in mind the way it shatters everytime. What to do then? =)

Anonymous said...

They say, 'Life is what happens to us while we're busy thinking about OTHER things' =)

Intricate said...

@spotlesssoul
I think we human beings have a knack to focus only on the bad things.. we keep forgetting the good that happens to us.. we all are in some way a bit cynical. And that is why we loose faith, we think that it always gets shattered. Maybe this is because we trust people more. We should trust ourselves and more that that we should trust Allah. :)
How about that?